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Essay Two_RD Evaluation__Jackson

Essay Two_RD Evaluation__Jackson

Q 1. Write your thesis statement.2. Does your thesis statement specify your chosen emotion and 3-4 visual elements? 3. Is your thesis listing grammatically parallel? 4. Is your thesis statement unified? Does each word and phrase contribute to a single idea? 5. Do you have "extra verbiage" in the statement that is not needed, such as, "In this essay," or "I will discuss"? Remember, you are not to use 1st or 2nd person voice in the essay. 6. If revisions are needed, make then, and rewrite your thesis statement. If not, indicate that no changes are necessary.7. Write the topic sentence for your summary body paragraph. 8. Does the summary body paragraph topic sentence provide a general overview for the paragraph? If not, revise and rewrite the topic sentence. 9. Write the topic sentence for your target audience paragraph. 10. Does the target audience body paragraph topic sentence indicate the specific target audience? If not, revise and rewrite the topic sentence.

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